JuneSSantos's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Driving]

i was about to give it 0 stars since the joke wasn't "women can't drive" but then i saw deer woman get hit by a can in the ending so it automatically changes everything

5

[Mix 'n' Match: Episode 1 - New Day, New Ideas]

I love when the little funny rat does the funny

And the black rat is kind of a badass XD

[a Slice of Anxiety: Raining Late.]

There's legitimately so much charm in the style you decided to go with

I legitimately really like how everything moves and the amount of expression the character have, and how some of these scenes are shot, like in the rain scene where you just cut to a water hose showering on the drawing is legitimately pretty good

My only real criticisms is that I feel like certain scenes could be a little faster, and I feel like it ended too soon?
I legitimately thought that there was going to be more after she starts catching on fire, but then it just ended and I felt like it was a setup for something that never happened, if that makes any sense

Still, I think this is pretty great, and you got something really strong going on right here
I can't wait to see what else you have in store for the future.

Quinndox responds:

Thank you much. I'm glad you like it.

In regards to the pacing and underwhelming conclusion, you're feelings are completely understandable and correct.

I had originally planned for the video to be much longer -- about double the length.
The main character (Lemon Cake) would've made it to school on time, but as a result of her soggy situation, she'd begin to feel flustered at the thought of standing out -- further adding payoff to the downpour as well as developing the theme of anxiety.

Unfortunately, I got a bit overly ambitious for my first cartoon and, mainly due to time constraints, had to reduce what I'd produce.

However, for any future Slice's of Anxiety, I'll likely actually continue to make them short in length as I feel the duration better fits what I'm going for.
And because of this, I'll make sure to keep in mind the shorter nature of them during the writing process, hopefully resulting in a much more solid pace / narrative.

Thank you for the feedback, it's much appreciated. 👍

have a bloomin' day.

[President Worm]

is president
theres worm

is good

[WhEn WoRmS AtTaCk]

mega awesome

[Snackers and Jones]

the fact you decided to come out as gay on a pico day cartoon is very brave of you

this rocks tony
legit the best thing on this website

[Solace: In Mind]

looks like boobs on thumbnail

[JENNY]

The thumbnail along with the title legitimately made me think it would be something else, and even though I don't get the joke, I legitimately like the animation

Not bad at all.

[Work Break : Foamy The Squirrel]

Honestly, this episode probably encapsulates everything I hate about this stupid fucking squirrel

I get that it's supposed to be meanspirited, that he's "haha i dont care about ur feelings funny XD", but just because it's intentional, doesn't mean it's good, nor funny
What's the joke? Oh! Foamy is being a dick with woman (which tbh is kinda based), she's depressed and he's an ass! laugh!
There is a right way to do meanspirited humor, but this is not the way, and no, I'm not saying you can't play around with depression or whatever else

You'd think that maybe this stupid fucking squirrel would stop being an edgy nightmare for a second and maybe try not to be insufferable for once in his fucking life, but no, he's still being insufferable, because apparently just spewing insults like a toddler is comedy
It would have been so much better if you just changed the pace, even for a single episode, and Foamy wasn't being insufferable and actually a character I actually want to see and listen to, and when the whole point of your character is to spew funny and opinions, and what he's saying is not funny, and his opinions are absolute trash, you're doing something very wrong.
No need to make him a saint/clean either, but balance things out.

And about the animation and the artstyle, and this might just be me, but I feel like it somehow have gotten worse through the years?
Back in the day it wasn't anything spetacular, but I think the artstyle at least had a charm to it, it was very rough, and it was "disgusting" in a good way, but now things feel a little bit too clean, like the characters are shaped like dolls, and even the backgrounds themselves feel incredibly bland in comparision to some of the older animations (this one is obviously a bad example, since it's an empty cinema, there isn't much you can do with it)
and not only that, the way these characters are animated feels incredibly unnatural, and that's mostly because there's an exaggerated amount of squash and stretch in them, not only it overshots, but it happens so frequently that you might aswell give these characters parkinson while we're at it, and you're probably doing this so you can cut some corners in the animation, but it doesn't look good, at all, either learn how to do squash and stretch, or try something else for the animation

And yeah, I know you're a single guy doing everything pretty much, aside from the voices for Germaine, and I can honestly respect that, the fact you're still around even after so many years, is already very respectable on itself, but through all of these years watching your animations, there was barely any improvements at all, in fact, you've went backwards in some of these aspects, so please, even if it takes longer for you to release your animations, try to take some more time in your animations, maybe try and improve your scripts if not the animation itself, because as it is right now, it's not even "so bad it's good" funny, it's just painfully unfunny

Also there was no funny Morbius references and since they were in the cinema you missed a huge opportunity there, and this sole reason is why I took all of the 5 stars away, sorry pal.

[Starbomb Studio]

i love game chumps please make more game rumps animation related animations this one was so fun i was giggling and loling really hard through the whole thing man but the only criticism i have on your animation is that there is a woman on it and she is abusive which I dont like because abuse is not cool and so isn't women but I specially dont like women abusing others ok so please take this criticism to heart so you dont repeat the same mistake in castlevania 7 so im giving it 3 stars but overall this is so fucking cool man i can't believe game grumps are making a comeback in the 21st century

Goostinaut responds:

Sorry you didn’t like the ending, i’ll keep it in mind. Thanks for the review.